Journalism for Women - A Practical Guide by Arnold Bennett
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fashion." A principle cannot be earnest, and faith cannot be an action.
The writer probably means that she sincerely thinks it her duty to commend fashion. "There are only two hats _well_ worn in Paris just now--this style and the small velvet toque trimmed with a group of plumes." For "well," read "largely" or "extensively." Note the other fault in this sentence. Wrong or clumsy constructions, laxity in the use of metaphors, &c.:-- "[We may] read, mark, learn, and inwardly digest their different charms." Fancy reading or learning or digesting a charm! "I have no objection to the lion lying down with the lamb--the Persian lamb--or rather, I should say, to the sable being allied to this fur, or to the combination of black caracule, or sable with ermine; any two furs, or indeed three furs, put together, I recognise as appropriate and elegant, but the frivolous working of furs with coloured satins and silks now obtaining the affections of the many is not at all to my taste." To comment on this piece of composition would be wicked. "There is a great fancy shown by the authorities this year _to_ elaborate furs." In English one says "_take_ a fancy _to_" but "_show_ a fancy _for_." "_It is_ small wonder that the fashion has obtained _such_ a hold on our affections, because _it is so_ becoming if _it is_ not overdone." "A single row of white pearls next the fair or even dark throat of a woman |
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